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Re: I'm Your Puppet
sorry for mistakes...I haven't proofread this... I wrote this two years ago.....-.-
Nov 17, 2006 -
Re: Speechless
Okay. Here are my suggestions: 1. If you're determined to write a rhyming poem, here's a hint - not all words that end in 'less' rhyme. It just gets annoying. ...
Nov 17, 2006 -
Re: Puzzle Pieces
I really like the last line. It brings the whole poem together.
Nov 16, 2006 -
Re: Saving James
I'm sorry that this is difficult to read in this format... I'll add more soon. ^_~
Nov 14, 2006
