Half-Note-James

Please note that I do not claim to be a poet. Thank you. I thought this was cute. I did it for my English class -------- The Tale of the ...

I haven't checked on my grammar just yet...I plan to soon....(I have limited time on the computer....-.-) I realize this is really short but I'll have more soon _______________________________________

This was assignment in my web design class. I know that the rythm is off but the teacher said I had to write the poem in this wasn't my choice... ...

This isn't really much of a story yet...but I just want to know if this is an interesting opening. ______________________________________ Dancing With a Marionette I’m not sure if I’m awake… ...

sorry for mistakes...I haven't proofread this... I wrote this two years ago.....-.-

I’m Your Puppet Yu Yu Hakusho Ashley Haines Pull the string and I’ll wink at you…. I’m your puppet. Cerise tendrils swayed back and forth over the fox’s back as ...

Okay. Here are my suggestions: 1. If you're determined to write a rhyming poem, here's a hint - not all words that end in 'less' rhyme. It just gets annoying. ...

There is little to say about myself, which is why I tend to write stories in the third person. The characters at the core of my mentality are far more ...

I am quite fond of your writing style. It makes me smile and laugh… You crack me up. I believe that you possess enough cleverness to spare. ^_^

I like how you've introduced yourself in an original manner. So you're majoring in Education... what level of students do you want to teach?

Speechless My mouth is open, wide and boundless My voice is here, but soundless You stare at me and smile in a way that seems endless Is it whole-hearted or ...

I really like the last line. It brings the whole poem together.

I'm sorry that this is difficult to read in this format... I'll add more soon. ^_~

Saving James Chapter One “Where I Once Was” I remember the day well. That was the day where everything would change and nothing would be the same. It was the ...