Haimerej

I would put them both in first person, with chapter titles like Antigone suggested. I agree with Jay here, just make sure the readers can easily tell which point of ...

Ooh this looks really interesting. I'd be glad if I had time this november, 'cause I really wanna do this.

I stand in front of the designated area, evil grin firmly in place. Although no one could see it behind the mask I'm wearing while I'm Zero. "You're sure the ...

Interesting way you took the abusive father cliche and made it your own. Whip? Unusual, therefore it isn't a cliche! But the first sentences makes readers think that she's already ...

Interesting idea for a short story. The immediate intro briefly reminded me of the Matrix. Kinda funny to see all that for just a 'bloody apple' as Sirius so humorously ...

Artemis Fowl by Eion Colfer (The beginning was too confusing) How dare you?! Artemis Fowl was absolutely incredible. What on earth was too confusing about the beginning? Sorry about the ...

Wait-- there's an eighth coming out?! YES! I love this series, read all seven that are out, even own Snakehead, and can't wait for the eighth. Eight books officially make ...

1)Which side of your jaw do you chew on? Mostly right, but sometimes I switch. 2)Can you write with both hands(ambidextrous),or..are you just plain lefty or righty? Righty. Definitely. 3)Do ...

I Gotta Feeling in your pants - Black Eyed Peas Let's Get It Started in your pants - Black Eyed Peas Little Lover in your pants - AC/DC She's Got ...

Depends on what philosophy you believe in. Do you believe in God?

Aha! So that's who said it. I noticed that quote on your messenger and was wondering where it was from. I'm actually surprised you joined the site, didn't think you'd ...

wut u men lik dis? Just kidding, I'm a bit of a grammar/spelling nazi, and try to enforce proper spelling, at the very least, among my friends. Thanks for the ...

I have no idea why, but ever since late last night I've been having a feeling that it'll go away either today or tomorrow. Strange, huh? Also, your avatar is ...

I'm a fantasy/sci-fi writer who has been having writer's block for the past few months and I have been trying to overcome it, currently trying to work on a fantasy ...

I've been suffering writer's block for a few months now, but I have a strange feeling that it's gonna go away soon... maybe today or tomorrow.