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Haileyanniful

  • Other Poetry Re: This House is NOT a Home

    Hello!(: Firstly, I'd just like to say congratulations for writing such a moving piece. I completely got the blunt message conveyed throughout your words. And I understand how it feels ...

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Untitled

    Hey(: I really liked your poem. It was greatly relatable for me, and I understand how it feels to be the person in this poem. The only thing that I ...

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Falsified

    Hello! Okay, first off, I'd like to say that I loved this poem. It was short and to the point, which really conveyed the message you were giving out. I ...

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Your Poem

    Hellooo(: For me, this poem was great. I can really relate to how you feel and the way you pieced everything together made the poem more for others to feel, ...

    Jul 29, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love

    Hello(: I really enjoyed your poem. Throughout the entire thing, I was thinking of how right you were. The way the sentences were pieced together made the poem better, in ...

    Jul 28, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: How it really is

    Hey! I'm Hailey. First off, I really liked this poem, for the stated fact that it is different from what you usually read. It flowed well together, and with such ...

    Jul 23, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Oh how I hate the stars

    Hello! Firstly, I'd just like to say that I really liked this poem, and you did a very nice job on it. Also, I appreciate how it was sort of ...

    Jul 23, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Another

    Another drink, Words spew out. Another smile to hide what's screaming to get out. Another free throw, and the walls come tumbling down. Another laugh to cover up the terrifying ...

    Jul 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Depression

    Hey! Okay, one word WOW. Other than the fact that this poem is probably my new all-time favorite, but also, so very relatable in my case. I love how the ...

    Jul 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Fake beauty

    Thank you. And yes, you're correct, I did leave out an "e". But the person in the poem is me.

    Jul 22, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Richard

    Hey! I'm Hailey. Your poem was great, in my opinion. I loved how it seems based on something that has really happened. And I also enjoyed how you named the ...

    Jul 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Last Words

    Heya! Personally, I am in love with this poem for the fact that you brought personality from (What seems, and yes, I may be wrong) your own world. The title ...

    Jul 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Fake beauty

    Looking in the mirror, beauty grabs the eyes. Looking in the heart, she dies inside; uncapable lips speak only lies. unstrustworthy smiles to gaurd the truth, while eager hands reach ...

    Jul 22, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I'll Wait

    This poem is freaking amazing! Nothing else to say!

    Apr 6, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Cheated on me

    Hello! I'm Hailey! Firstly, I really enjoyed this poem! I felt the deceit as well as how much you cared through the verses. I think you did a magnificant job ...

    Apr 6, 2010


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