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Re: This House is NOT a Home
Hello!(: Firstly, I'd just like to say congratulations for writing such a moving piece. I completely got the blunt message conveyed throughout your words. And I understand how it feels ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Untitled
Hey(: I really liked your poem. It was greatly relatable for me, and I understand how it feels to be the person in this poem. The only thing that I ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Falsified
Hello! Okay, first off, I'd like to say that I loved this poem. It was short and to the point, which really conveyed the message you were giving out. I ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Your Poem
Hellooo(: For me, this poem was great. I can really relate to how you feel and the way you pieced everything together made the poem more for others to feel, ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Love
Hello(: I really enjoyed your poem. Throughout the entire thing, I was thinking of how right you were. The way the sentences were pieced together made the poem better, in ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: How it really is
Hey! I'm Hailey. First off, I really liked this poem, for the stated fact that it is different from what you usually read. It flowed well together, and with such ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Oh how I hate the stars
Hello! Firstly, I'd just like to say that I really liked this poem, and you did a very nice job on it. Also, I appreciate how it was sort of ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Another
Another drink, Words spew out. Another smile to hide what's screaming to get out. Another free throw, and the walls come tumbling down. Another laugh to cover up the terrifying ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Depression
Hey! Okay, one word WOW. Other than the fact that this poem is probably my new all-time favorite, but also, so very relatable in my case. I love how the ...
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: Fake beauty
Thank you. And yes, you're correct, I did leave out an "e". But the person in the poem is me.
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: Richard
Hey! I'm Hailey. Your poem was great, in my opinion. I loved how it seems based on something that has really happened. And I also enjoyed how you named the ...
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: The Last Words
Heya! Personally, I am in love with this poem for the fact that you brought personality from (What seems, and yes, I may be wrong) your own world. The title ...
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: Fake beauty
Looking in the mirror, beauty grabs the eyes. Looking in the heart, she dies inside; uncapable lips speak only lies. unstrustworthy smiles to gaurd the truth, while eager hands reach ...
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: I'll Wait
This poem is freaking amazing! Nothing else to say!
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Cheated on me
Hello! I'm Hailey! Firstly, I really enjoyed this poem! I felt the deceit as well as how much you cared through the verses. I think you did a magnificant job ...
Apr 6, 2010
