Hailey_Ann

Hello darling, Wow, okay, i typically liked this poem. Obviously, it was written from real feelings, unlike many love poems that were just thrown together. I like straight-forwardness, and this ...

WOW... I'm speechless. That poem was absolutely wonderful. It was very intriguing! The wording was wonderful and as soon as i began reading, the imagery began. You seem like you ...

Hello! Wow. I found this poem really intriguing. It was short and straight to the point. I liked It a lot. But one thing I think maybe you should do ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this poem as well. It was very simple, but also didn't beat around the bush. You put your feelings out there and let it be. The ...

"What is he thinking?" I wonder, as I look into his eyes. The nothingness that lies there Is too great of a surprise. His tender touch sends shivers down my ...

Hey! I really enjoyed your poem. No, it didn't rhyme, but who cares, it was still a great poem. I can relate to you to a certain extent. You did ...

Hey!!! Okay, truthfully, i didn't particularly like some of the rhymes in this poem. Some of your wording choices weren't very good, but maybe that's because you were trying to ...

You tell me that your sorry, But I know that you don't mean It. I'm tired of crying over you, And all your pathetic secrets. You can't take back the ...

Hello!! Mmmmh, okay, I'm not particularly sure about what I thought of this poem. It seemed direct and I generally like that In a poem, but maybe It needed more?? ...

Hello! Okayyy, overall, a good poem. It flows, but yes, just kind of hits a dead end which is not such a good thing. Where you running out of stuff ...

WOW.... I really enjoyed this poem. The rhymes seemed to go very well together and the emotion was very direct. But yet, still I'm not completely sure of what the ...

Hello! I really liked your poem. One piece of advice though is that in a poem like this, i don't think you really need to make it rhyme! Otherwise, it ...

[b] Sometimes i will lie and say that i'm perfectly okay. I'll say it doesn't matter, when of course, it does. Lies set my insides on fire. Am i mad ...

Last chance Last chance, Please don't refuse to take it, i wish you'd just look at me and promise that we'll make it. It's scaring me that you have nothing ...