Hailey_Ann

Hi... Well, this poem was a little weird...(No offense) There are only a few errors I see in here...I think that maybe there should be some punctuation somewhere, to maybe ...

Hello there! Me again! I reviewed your last poem "I just want" and thought it was really cute. I like the repetition in your poems, so keep it up! Okay, ...

Hey there! I'm Hailey, and I'm going to be reviewing your poem!! Okay, Here we go: I liked your poem for the most part (no offense), but some of the ...

Hello there! I'm Hailey, and I'll be reviewing this poem!! Okay, Usually, I dislike song-y love poems, but this one was actually really good! I had to read it more ...

Hey! I'm Hailey, and I'll be reviewing this poem today!! Here we go!: Okay, There was only one little thing that I disliked about your poem, and that was the ...

Hello there!! Hailey here, and I'll be reviewing your poem! Okay, I liked this poem a lot! It was great and held a lot of emotion for me. The wording ...

Hey there!! To start, I'm Hailey, and I'm happy to be reviewing your poem!! Okay, I LOVED the beginning. I think it was a strong beginning and it totally caught ...

She swears she's okay, But you can see it in her face, Behind every fake smile, She falls harder everyday. He tries to reach out to her, But she knows ...

It's funny how we trust someone who never tells the truth, It's funny how we push ourselves, though we know that there's no room. It's funny how life's moto is ...

Wow! I usually hate repetition in poems, but this poem is an exception. I loved this poem, it gives a completely new meaning to the original "The boy who cried ...

Hey there!! Well! I must say!! This poem is just wonderful!! You did great with the wording and I liked the fact that It didn't even rhyme, but it was ...

Hello June!! I thought I'd drop by and leave you a comment (since you've commented on some of my pieces), and.....I found this.... Wow...This poem was so tragic, but then ...

Hello there!! Well, first off, I'd like to say that I liked how you didn't name the poem "No one cares", you named it "No one". I thought that was ...

Hey there! Overall, I like your poem, but as the other reviewers said, I disliked some of the word choice. You should change some of the wording because to me, ...

Hey! Okay, this poem was 'okay'. It wasn't very original, but I liked some of the wording. one thing I disliked was that some of the rhyming didn't flow like ...