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It's rather funny how you mirrored some of my own thoughts. Thanks though, the critique really helped. I agree about the repetition. My original idea was to show how she ...

Well this is my first thing on this site. This is an idea I have had for a bit, and have played with numerous time. I am frusterated with it ...

Hahaha well YAY for you writing again! Also I won’t “rip” it apart but I will make comments if that is okay... My fingers easily sliced through the warm sand. ...

Almost on cue, the wind dove past him, giving the sensations of cutting into his skin, and caught up the smoke. Okay it should be, “giving the sensation”, the sentence ...

*takes a deep breath* wow, that was very well done. I am a big fan of Death Note, having watched all the Anime and read the Manga. And you did... ...

Yay for Editing! Okay so most of this IS my oppinion so you can take it or leave it! The stuff in bold is stuff I want to draw your ...

So... are we done with this? I've been waiting for someone to write but nothing has happened...

Okay, this was deffinetly one of the most unique things I have ever read. I read the whole thing, mostly trying to figure out what was going on. Like most ...

Yay I got my much needed info! Also if they have to feed off of their sire how does a Vampire Liege ever get formed? Or new Vampire clans in ...

Good, job, I used to be addicted to all the Red Wall books. And for only being eleven you are doing a great job. I agree with some of the ...

Hahaha tell you more about myself? Should be a breeze... I love Fiction, Fantasy, Sci-Fi, and Romance is okay. I mostly write fantasy to be honest, but every once in ...

Well this helps, i need to at least have some idea about what Im writing about! Thank you very much! And Paramore if you want to add anything we are ...

Wow... so it took me forever to find this place :P. Anyways, I already posted this in the forum but figured this would be a better place to do it ...

Hey all, I used to belong to the Young Writers Club all those many years ago and now I have just joined here. I am already getting plugged into the ...

Okay, I know they cant be a vampire until they are approved of by their leader. But I was hoping for a few more details then just that, maybe look ...