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HUA

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: The Real World (Chapter 1)

    Hi! i'm HUA here to review! First, I'm a bit confused over the topic, how can this be a novel when the main character killed herself? has it not already ...

    Feb 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: CandyLand

    LOVE IT! Especially that you but effort in mixing two opposite emotions together! you started off with placing loneliness into James's heart, and later on when he meets Annabeth, everything ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Belinda Cabbotry: The Midnight Jogger and Fire (PART 14)

    OOO how interesting. I like the first part of your short story more than your second one. Agreeing with the person below me, you could have done a better job ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 4: (part 2)

    Wow. for me, i am a BIG mediaeval times stories lover! It means a lot to me to read a story like mine. This story brings an awesome story about ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Descent Chapter 14: Thy Will Be Done Part 2

    This is the first chapter i have ever read on this sight. So far, the literature on this sight is amazing! i love how you described the deep loneliness in ...

    Feb 22, 2015


so many languages have fallen / off of the edge of the world / into the dragon's mouth.
— Lucille Clifton