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Re: Hi My Name Is
Now this is truly something unique and original! I have never before read a depression story with depression as a character. Or any story with an emotion/sickness as a character ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The UnBible: The Old Testament: The Book of Gensis
I understand, I'm not offended, and I understand. I really like this story! :D
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Of Fire and Shadow
Let me first say, I'm a Boy Scout, and as I was reading this, I could just envision us gathering around the fire, doing all our activities, comical and dramatic. ...
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Re: Messages
I think you have a really good poem here! What I like most about this is the chaotic blend of elements. Normally, I'd say this is all too much, but ...
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Re: The path of the daffodils
I do like this poem quite a bit! Daffodils are a very pretty flower, and a good subject for this poem. Now, contrary to the review above mine, I think ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: The UnBible: The Old Testament: The Book of Gensis
Hahaha, this is really fun! I enjoyed reading this, and it's a very fresh and new take on a classic story. I'm a very observant and practicing Catholic, and I ...
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Re: Broken Glass Girl
Hello again Spook! :D I went browsing through the forums, and I saw another poem by you, and I couldn't click it fast enough! haha. I really loved this poem, ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Teenage Emergency
If it were possible to 'Like' this poem a million and six times, I'd sit here clicking that button ALL DAY! This is an absolutely inspired and amazing poem! I ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Love Never Dies
Hi there! First of all, welcome to YWS, and I hope you find everything here to your liking. The people are all pretty awesome, and there's lots of great things ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: A thimble, a rose, and a ring.
Absolutely beautiful! A piece of masterful poetic genius! I am welling up with emotion reading this poem, it's so sweet and passionate! :D Quite honestly, I'm jealous I didn't write ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Jelly Beans
This poem is positively delicious! I really like the idea here, cause it's something not a lot of people have done (at least I haven't read many of them). I ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: A Hurting Heart
Hi there! I think this is a lovely poem, very passionate and sweet. I can really feel the genuine emotion in it. I know the feeling expressed here, so I ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Torturous sin
This is a very thoughtful and well written poem! :D I like the whole tone of regret and remorse, with a little bit of anger mixed in. It's a very ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Divine Inspiration
This poem is absolutely marvelous. It's a wonderful metaphor of divine inspiration! It's a circle, a cycle, a succession, it's a whole bunch of great stuff going on here. I ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Wonders
I think this was way too short to communicate all the deep semantical messages this poem has! No offense of course, but I think there's a whole lot more that ...
May 3, 2011
