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Re: Influenza
*In spirit and admiration of how amazing this story is, I will review it without the use of any "The's,' beginning now! :D* I think this is a very interesting ...
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Re: When We Were Younger
Short, sweet, simple, and with a great message! I like this poem a lot. It makes me very nostalgic thinking about these vivid images you've put in here. I used ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Sons of Mars
Hi there DramaLlama! I really liked this story quite a lot. The imagery was good, the character building was superb, and I really love that last line! This story kind ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Stars in the fallen sky
This is a very deep and inspirational poem. I can just see the image now, a nighttime sky filled with stars all streaking gold across the deep blue. Ooooh, chills! ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Winterland.
Please please please please PLEASE don't just let this die! This is far too amazing to let go! As you can see by the multitude of reviews you've gotten here! ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The God-Man
Call me the biggest fool of them all, because I absolutely love this poem you're written here! I've found quite a few Christian poems today, so I'm happy, and this ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Because I'm a Christian
Looooooooooooooooooooooove this poem! It's absolutely inspiring and soul-touching! :D I'm a very observant and practicing Cristian, and I'm so so so glad to read this poem! It's so true, and ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Only for a moment
Aww, it's sweet and adorable! I like it quite a lot :D Thanks for recommending this for me to review. Not let me get to the details... so let's hold ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Abyss
I really like this poem. Very deep. You might even say, abyssal! haha, see what I did there? I especially like the dramatic irony of the title VS content. With ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Nightrise
This is a very cryptic and mysterious poem. I think the language is used very well, and there's a lot of cool stuff here. Now, details then.... As others wait ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Therese and Isabelle
Now that's more like it! See, we can all be buddies and get along peacefully :D SOCKS to the rescue, haha.
May 4, 2011 -
Re: One Shot. Calling All Critiques!!!!!
Let me just say at first, we're all writers here on this site, and we don't need to be jabbing each other. I understand the title is a little irritating ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: vengeance (chapter three)
Allow me to use your story in order to gain another 100-200 points for my team, haha! :D nah seriously, I'm looking forward to reviewing this though. I like this ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Therese and Isabelle
Now this is something new! How refreshing to see a love poem that's about two girls, and not a boy and a girl. I mean, I love a classic love ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Ghosts That Linger
Thanks for the feedback Ego! I'm glad I got those hiccups in my story worked out, and I hope it's a little stronger now than it was. Appreciate the read ...
May 4, 2011
