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Re: The UnBible: The New Testament: The Book of Luke
Hmm, another very interesting take on a popular story! Just a couple of notes though: - So Christ had a wife, haha. I believe it! I'm sure he endorsed love ...
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Re: vengeance (chapter nine)
You know what, I was wrong, THIS is your best chapter so far! Let's see why.... I woke up the next day sore and in tears. The bittersweet taste of ...
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Re: vengeance (chapter eight)
This is promising! :D I liked this chapter the best out of any of them, I think. Gettin' into it! The door opened reluctantly with a loud creaking sound, as ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: vengeance (chapter seven)
Again, getting right into it. As we made our way to the centre of the forest, the attacks became more frequent. Wave after wave of blue tribals flung themselves without ...
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Re: Spiral-Horned Dragon Head Portrait
Well move over Vincent Van Gogh, we've found your equivalent with a pencil! Incredibly drawn, unbelievably conceived! I couldn't even imagine drawing something of this degree! Now for a top ...
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Re: Bone-Plummage Dragon Portrait
Who could ever hate this drawing? This is exquisite! Positively incredible! I've never seen such a beautiful drawing done with such a simple tool! What ever could you possibly not ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: vengeance (chapter six)
Again, diving right in! :D My conversations with them were often interrupted by Dean, who told me that George, who was somehow the Chi of both twins, had the opposite ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: vengeance (chapter five)
Alright, let's just dive right into it! What happened next was fairly anticlimactic. Two boys, identical down to the very cloths and weapons they carried, stepped from the foliage calmly. ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: vengeance (chapter four)
Hello again 'ol buddy, 'ol pal! Looks like another interesting installment you've got here, and it brought me more action, and hopefully more points (since I've been feelin' out of ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Hi, I'm agnostic.
This is an interesting poem here. I don't see this perspective too much in the writing I've discovered in my life, so this is definitely something new for me. Let's ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Lost Carnage I
Where do I begin? Hmmm, how about...THIS STORY IS FREAKIN INTENSE! I enjoyed reading it, and now I'm ready to offer my critiques. Hopefully this review is as action-packed as ...
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Re: Shout it to the World.
Well look at that! Now that's a very relatable, sweet poem you've written there :D I like it a lot, and I think you have a very nice story and ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Fighting For The Words
Love love love love love! This poem is so adorable and sweet! I absolutely love it :D Alright, I suppose you want some details now, haha, so here you go... ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: When the Darkness Comes
Ooooh, chills! I really really really like this poem here. It could do withough the double-spacing, but I can get past that. This really exemplifies the torturous darkness that comes ...
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Re: Atlas
Let me first say I'm a huge fan of the Percy Jackson books. They're creative, hilarious, well-written, and have great characters. I think this poem is a good tribute to ...
May 5, 2011
