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Re: Trouble on the Homefront - Prologue
Prologue Secret Service My father and mother told me to get ready quickly, that we had to get moving. I didn’t understand; it was Saturday afternoon, and no one went ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Caleb's story, chapter two
HIGHWHITESOCKS again! Now, let me see about this chapter . . . First off, a good note, I like the communism joke. It's only a little tic-tac in the big ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Caleb's story, chapter one
Your good friend HIGHWHITESOCKS here, buddy! Let me tell you right now, I'm speaking to you as a fellow author, with best possible feedback and experience I can give, as ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: wristbiter
Suicide has never sounded so mesmerizing! I'm HIGHWHITESOCKS, and I think your choice of words combined with this concept makes for a very effective poem. I especially like the line ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: In The Storm
Very nice writing here. I especially like the reference to the specific verse in the Bible. I'm a strong Catholic, so I appreciate a good show of faith. Very nice ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: The Circle of Life
Hello there! Very very nice poem. The imagery of the light and dark sides of life is very well depicted. I like it very much. I'd greatly appreciate it if ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Ghosts That Linger
Ghosts that Linger Guns . . . I'm plagued by guns . . . guns are the most haunting ghosts of all. Ghosts of war, of hatred, and of death. ...
Oct 22, 2010
