HIGHWHITESOCKS

The Unnoticed Dove Redmond opened the door and held it, as he usually did for his classmates when he reached the room first. Ben and his friends walked by without ...

You are a God-gifted author, bubbles! I read this one, and Anna's point of view, and the emotional turbulence is absolutely crushing. The imagery is masterful, I felt like I ...

Wolf - The tone isn't too emotional, because it's meant to be nostalgic. The narrator is remembering something, but I see what you mean, maybe I should add some more ...

Thanks for the helpful input everyone! I hope to hear more from you in the future, and if you have any ideas on how to proceed, please share! - SOCKS

A thousand times better with description, I really managed to get the whole feeling of "going to war, excitement, adrenaline" and all that jazz. Keep improving upon your descriptions, and ...

Wolf, Thanks a million for your impressions, and I will be sure to take another look through this story here. Honestly, I wrote this in haste from a spark idea ...

You know you're a writer when you can relate to many of the things on this list! Haha :)

Hello all authors, this is HIGHWHITESOCK. I had this idea for a writing activity that can help everyone figure out how to look at stories/poems and figure out what could ...

I'd be super appreciative if you could review this! Thanks a million! :) - SOCKS

Seizing the Day Flash Fiction Carson laughed. She always laughed at my jokes and my stories, even if they weren’t funny. I loved that about her. “No shit!” She said, ...

Hi there! This story is very beautifully painted, and the imagery makes me feel like I can see everything perfectly. The only thing I would say, and it's mostly just ...

Welcome to YWS, and this is a very nice first entry! :) I feel very connected to this poem, because it reminds me a lot of myself. It's very relatable ...

Hi there Sachi ( I hope you don't mind if I call you that(: ) ! I'm HIGHWHITESOCKS, but you can call me "socks" or anything else, haha. I'd like ...

Hey everyone! This is HIGHWHITESOCKS, with a recently touched-up short story. I tried to address all of the things I was replied on, and I really would appreciate some more ...

Hi all! Great to be a member of YWS. I have this story that I had an idea, and wrote a prologue for, but I'm stuck on how to proceed ...