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It's all good! (: Message received, everything you're trying to communicate effectively reaches me. And thank you for not bashing my points and immediately going on the defensive as I ...

You know, I agree almost wholly with you on what you've said about love, and princes, and losers. 9 times out of 10, you're absolutely right. More men than there ...

This chapter has a lot of, how would I say, half-things. I like the idea of him finding a friendly family to stay with, and I especially like the slavery ...

You really are getting much better with descriptions. I'm a little disappointed, cause I would have liked to see more interaction between McClellan and Caleb, but what you have works. ...

crafty - Once again, it is a nostalgic prologue, so he's not as emotionally involved as he would be in real-time. Maybe it's not as clear that this is a ...

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Married Student Housing “Well, err . . .” Mr. Golding, the head admissions officer was caught off guard by the question David asked him. If he were honest with himself, ...

Thank you Rachel! :D I'm glad you enjoyed. If there's anything I can review for you, don't hesitate to ask! - SOCKS

I'll take a look at your stories, if you want a reviewer. :D I love seeing the new talent coming into this site - SOCKS

Although Inception was my favorite, I have to say, I really liked Toy Story 3!

The characters in the prologue become more developed as the story goes on, so they will become more developed. And the dialogue is supposed to be a little formal, since ...

Ally - I'm glad you found some redeeming qualities in this chapter, haha! I'm glad I managed to make someone laugh with my lame "not that into you" joke :D ...

Lupis - I greatly appreciate your review, and I am constantly looking this over and fine-tuning it. I would like to address the point you've made about length though. First ...

Haha, I've already told you my thoughts on this chapter. Just make sure you use more physical details to describe emotions, and let us SEE what they feel. And make ...

Haha, thank you again bubbles! And just for the record, if something is owned by more than one person, I believe it's the "s" then apostrophe. Ex: the boy's room ...