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Re: Imaginary: Part 1
It's definitely getting better, that I can see. But I think the one thing you're really missing is a description of what things they do in Imagine. Like, maybe tell ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Imaginary: Part 1
(spams "Like" button 8 million times) OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:) Is it possible to make twelve more accounts so that I can like this story more? Seriously, this should be f
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Always There
Awwww! This is a really sweet and charming story! Let me do my best to review it... The first time I saw him was last year. I was a Freshman ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Eating for Two
This is a short story I conceived of just today. I feel so sad every time I hear about a relationship ending this way, or in a similar way, and ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Voiceless
I like it overall, it seems like a very interesting story, and the title is top-notch! :D I wouldn't mind at all reading more, but just a few helpful hints ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Button Man's Jazz - Chapter Two
Chapter Two Pound for Pound It wasn’t Virgil’s snoring that kept Harmony awake every night. Although it startled him the first few nights he’d moved in with the man, it ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Button Man's Jazz - Chapter One, Part Two
(continued from chapter one, part one) “Alright, looks like we’re here.” Virgil stepped on the brakes, and the tires screeched a greeting to the curb as the car pulled up ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Dog Days Gone
Dog Days Gone This tale is based on the true story of my dog Chloe, and from her coming home with us until her death. She died today, May 31st, ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Skeleton
Well he may be bare-boned, but this review sure won't be! :D I like the color and shading on the skeleton a lot. He looks like a very believable manga ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Button Man's Jazz - Chapter One, Part One
Chapter One Strictly Professional Harmony woke up when the telephone on the bedside table rang. He wasn’t sure how many people had the number for this apartment, but he’d taken ...
May 26, 2011 -
Re: vengeance (chapter ten)
What an awfully Fallout-esquire story development! Solomon Graves, what a prophetic name! I kinda wish you'd used it for a more main-story character, but hey, you's the author! Anyway, to ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Button Man's Jazz - Prologue
^^^ Thanks for the kind words! Spook: Nope, I called exactly the right person talented :D haha
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
7/10. Interesting, and sounds cool, but I'm not sure what it means.
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Button Man's Jazz - Prologue
Prologue The Man in the Pinstriped Suit Harmony spat on the ground at the pigeon that had just landed next to his old, shabby brown loafer. It gave an indignant ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Yes, I have a Pink Suit
Well that certainly is a man in a pink suit! (he is a man right? lol, just joking) So let's see what I have to say... I think the first ...
May 14, 2011
