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I picked novels though I never posted anything but poems.The reason is that I don't have much time to write that much,but I love to. 8)

I love it!It's excellent,no changes needed.Plus,I love the way you think:)Good job

I think it's really good.It's pretty simple though,but if you like it like that,keep it.:)It's very good.

Wow!I love it,it's so amazing.I think it's perfect.Well done:)

Hi, I like it,but I think you need to link it-somehow.I kinda got lost in the middle,but I think it's good:)

I really like it,I don't think it needs any change.Bravo:D

Really good,I love it,that's how I feel now.:)I think it's pretty good,it doesn't need many changes. nito > into I love the beginning: here i am :Dkeep up the good ...

I don't know,I think (ain't) sounds better,but thanks.I'll think about it.:)

close your eyes and open your heart you'll see what others can not you'll see the truth you'll see what was there all along money ain't power TV ain't fun ...

I really liked it,very very good.Well,I don't know what to say,it's pretty good.keep up the good work.:)

Very nice.I like to leave myself think and wonder,about anything,just like you did here.:)

I really like it.I like the feeling it gives and how it can be easily imagined.However,I think it needs more rhyming.Very nice though.:)

Hi,:) Well,I like to play soccer,I like to draw and -believe it or not -I like to favorite colors are: black,blue and green.

The idea and the way it felt made me feel like I was there.It's very nice but the rhyming needs some fixing.I'm glad you're not depressed.:)

Amazing,absolutely amazing.I like your view of the world.I guess that's something we share.Keep up the good work.:)