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Hi! I've read both poems - the first version and the improved one. I think both are great. I love the way you think and wonder how life moves around ...

Hi! I love your poem,it is absolutely amazing! :) Keep on writing.

Thank you guys! That was very encouraging, although I think it was wrong to write it, but anger boiled in my head. I really must control it. Thanks again. :)

I'm not quite sure if I used (compromise) right,so please comment.

I heard death speak a name, not a friend,not a foe, but someone I do know. Should I say or should I not? What if death hears the thought?! If ...

This is awesome! It is so good, just needs a little fixing. The Ghost I Hear Thus one fine evening, As I lay snuggled in bed, A loud noise came ...

Wow! I think this is the best poem I've read in my life. It's true, I believe you're very talented. Do use it in the sake of good. I was ...

Hello there! I think your poem is really nice. It's a common thought, but not many wright it, I guess.It's not like I have enough time to read. What I ...

Amazing!I think it's perfect.Keep up the good work, I mean it!

Hi! I'd like to say..awesome! :) Looks like you're talented. Keep up the good work.

wow!This poem is awesome. Love it, keep up the good work. :)

Hello there! I think your poem is very good, but while reading I felt like i was reading a story more than a poem. Your ideas and the way you ...

Years passed and no one had heard of Hannah. She soon was forgotten by everyone except her parents. They lived a sad life waking up every day hoping they’ll find ...

Amazing poem, I felt like I was there too. Good job with everything, I think it's great. :)

Hi guys, Many thanks for the comments and advises.I'm not quite sure how to make the poem look,but I tried. Please comment.