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Hi! I'm not sure what to say.The poem seems great, but a million thoughts came upon me. I'm not sure what you my opinion, the poem needs a bit of ...

Hi! This chapter is so so so cool. :D:D I love the action and I think you did a great job at letting us-readers-imagine it. :) I honestly love it ...

I was walking all alone. My head up high and the sun's shining. My heart's floating and the birds are chirping. The world's so nice. I'm so proud I did ...

Hi there! :) I love the poem, it's really good and well, full of pain. Back to your hurt shouts, I didn't really understand this line, if you don't mind ...

Wow!I love this! It feels as if it's about me.:D I've always thought like that:) I think it's an awesome poem. Good luck with the rest and keep up the ...

Thanks I know it wasn't pretty good.This might even be my worst poem.It's just that I'm in a hurry and I've been preventing myself from writing to do other things,so ...

I stop myself, but soon weaken. Writing is what I like. With it I express myself and through it I relax. My feelings are flowing, like water down glass. With ...

Many thanks. I'm glad someone finally read it. I'll fix this chapter and try to put the rest as soon as I have more time. I'm also glad you liked ...

Hmm.. Free Willy Peter Pan Iron man(1 and 2) Pirates of the Caribbean(all parts) Harry Potter(I've watched until 4 and part of 5) Monster house 10 things I hate about ...

I think this is a very strong poem - more than your others. I think what you wrote about Kashmir made me feel the poem much more and it also ...

Yup, I agree with Juniper. I kinda got lost in the middle and at the end I felt like rereading it as if I missed something. Please make it more ...

It's amazing how from all the poems I've read yours were the best. I guess those who trust GOD and thank him day after day are the ones who feel ...

Your ideas are brilliant and your rhyming is very good, but you really need to fix how the poem looks. It does bother many readers. I believe if you do ...

Terrific! Very good! The idea is one of the best. It makes us realize our mistakes and see the world like it really is. The rhyming went pretty well. I ...