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Hi there! I love the story. However, I admit it isn't very new. I don't want to discourage you or anything, you're actually really good and writing is about expressing ...

(while our teacher wasn’t looking.) (The three of them walked off, leaving me alone on the dark, eerie cliff, alone.) I don't get it. Where are they? Are they in ...

Hi!This is excellent! I think it's a bit long, but I'm no expert. I didn't notice anything wrong or mysterious, but there's one thing: (around neck) I think you ought ...

Okay, hmm.. I'll be honest. I'm not sure if I understand what you're saying, but I think I like it. :D Maybe you should try to describe your feeling a ...

Hi! This poem of yours is lovely and I've enjoyed it very much. Well done, easy meaning yet could be deep, has been put into words with great rhyming. Your ...

Hi there! Is this just chapter one? It's so so interesting. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest. Please continue writing. :) I love the plot of the story, ...

Notes spilled softly from your guitar as we sat by the fireplace. The occasional pop of slowly burning wood added to the romance of the music. I recognized the song ...

Hi there! I've got to say I loved it. The flow was so good and the meaning was easy to understand. I loved the rhyming too. Honestly, I think it ...

Thank you guys! I really appreciate the effort you made in giving such lovely advice. Thanks very much. I'll see what i can do. :D

Her eyes like flame bombs and voice full of hatred. A woman of fury and unjust. I will come to her, when she's asleep. With a cape of midnight and ...

Thanks.I'll try to fix that problem. You're right. It sounded quite strange when I read it again. Weird, I thought it was good when I wrote it. Many thanks. I'm ...

Hannah woke up to find herself in a room. It wasn’t like a place she’s seen before. Panic struck her. “Where am I?” she thought as she got up, but ...

Wow! :D It's really good. I agree with what you say. Love usually brings pain and at the end you take another look and say: "Man!I was stupid.Where's the gain?!" ...

Hi there! I think it's a nice poem,sort of funny too. :D But his heart strings sing A lovely song he calls Rose. I like this part a lot. :) ...

:) It's one of the best. :) Keep writing.