HBGirl4ever

I'm a bit confused. What happened to the prince after. who died, and who didn't? I had to read it a few times, but I do sort of understand it. ...

It was a really pretty poem, but I felt like it was kind of all over the place. There's also a lot of repetition, and these would be great opportunities ...

This is very true, even though I'm not home schooled, some of my friends from camp are, and they get a lot of weird looks and questions when they bring ...

I like how she is looking off to the side, so it makes you wonder what she is seeing. But it really has no color to it, and you are ...

Wow, that was powerful. I could almost feel your anger and protectiveness of it. Another thing I loved is that you're only the second person who started each line with ...

Man, I never thought that I was going to read a poem I can really relate to. It really put into poetic words how many teens are feeling, including me. ...

That was actually really nice. I could really feel the emotions that you were trying to show through this poem. Although, it's very important that a new line of poetry ...

Even though you said you didn't really feel this poem, I did feel as if I could relate to this post. It was really beautiful. But you have to remember ...

That is really powerful and beautiful. I actually really get what you're saying, which is more than I can say for other poems. You really caught every point of the ...

Wow, I liked how you stopped right as he was about to read the letter. I like your idea, a place captured by people you take out the creativity. But ...

It's a really interesting story, but I did find quite a few grammar problems. Like I always say, check and edit your work TWICE. I honestly do like the story, ...

Okay, sometimes it seems like you are just talking to use, and the other is that you're reading poetry. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. ALWAYS edit and ...

I like this, because it makes you wonder what it's like for people who all of a sudden get a huge change in their lives, emotionally, physically, or both. Sorry ...

This is an interesting carry on of Alice In Wonderland. I'm a bit confused, though. Does this take place present day, in the past, or in the future? It would ...

Wow, that's really sad, but it was also really interesting to see a different perspective of a suicidal girl. I'd like to see a small transition through her diary of ...