HBGirl4ever

Wow, this is really good, and I like how you got the colors correct. I also think the different pose ties the whole picture together, and makes it seem like ...

Wow, I really like how you used the whole page, and the notebook lines actually make it look cooler. And, (not knowing if that was intentional), it makes it look ...

Wow, I honestly really like this story. Where did you find this idea? I also really like how everything we have today is so old fashioned in the book, because ...

I agree with your last review. The grammar at first did through me off, but behind that was a beautiful poem. I liked the feel of a different era, it ...

Loved this so much. This is probably my favorite poem I've ever read on Young Writers Society. Just don't get too...preachy. These mother nature poems can get a little like ...

I really like your use of texture. Closeup is my favorite type of photography. But in some of them, I feel like there is too much glare. And edit them ...

Yes, really, welcome to yws! This has a great flow to it, which I really look for in poetry. I think though that you should put a new twist on ...

I like how you put the feeling of love in a different way, because it really makes it more interesting. This is actually one of my favorite poems written and ...

Your drawings are really cool, especially the Pokemon. The fourth one wasn't as great, but they were all pretty good. I liked the colors, they really made it. I can't ...

Wow, this is really beautiful. I just feel that you have more than one subjects. I'm pretty sure its the green tree frog, but the vibrancy of the middle of ...

Okay, I'm so relieved that this is the first narrative poem that's actually a narrative poem! It has the right flow to it, and it is perfect. Plus, I like ...

This is beautiful, and makes a lot of sense. I would just like a little more closure when the poem ends, just so it doesn't lose its perspective. But other ...

I like how you use the vocabulary of the time period to your advantage. It holds its own, which is very important in dramatic poetry. The title is also very ...

My favorite in the group by far is My Memory. I really like how you did it in black and white. It gave the picture a very classic feel. It ...

Very imaginative. It has a certain flow that I really like. But no matter what, you should always start a new line with a capital letter. Even if you're in ...