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  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story

    Thank you for you comments! I agree that it is somewhat bland at the beginning. Because I%u2019m just starting out sometimes I forget that nobody can see what%u2019s inside my ...

    Jun 11, 2019
  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story

    Thank you so much. I appreciate the comment! ^^ That%u2019s actually a good point and I guess I knew it would be a problem when writing it. Basically when I ...

    Aug 26, 2018
  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story

    Thank you so much. I appreciate the comment! ^^ That%u2019s actually a good point and I guess I knew it would be a problem when writing it. Basically when I ...

    Aug 26, 2018
  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story

    Thank you so much. I appreciate the comment! ^^ That%u2019s actually a good point and I guess I knew it would be a problem when writing it. Basically when I ...

    Aug 26, 2018
  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story

    I see, yes. You%u2019re totally right. I%u2019ve been having a look over it recently to see what I can do with it. Thank you very much for your input and ...

    Aug 26, 2018
  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story

    Ah, I see. I kinda felt that as I was writing but I wasn't entirely sure how to correct it... I'll have to take another look at it. Thank you ...

    Aug 25, 2018
  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story

    Thank you! I appreciate you saying so. :))

    Aug 25, 2018
  • Short Story » Other, Dramatic Re: Pain

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    Wow. I really enjoyed this! The way you use your words is so poetic and captivating - I was hooked from beginning to end! The imagery here is so powerful ...

    Aug 17, 2018


The thing about plummeting downhill at fifty miles an hour on a snack platter - if you realize it's a bad idea when you're halfway down, it's too late.
— Rick Riordan, The Son of Neptune