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Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story
Thank you for you comments! I agree that it is somewhat bland at the beginning. Because I%u2019m just starting out sometimes I forget that nobody can see what%u2019s inside my ...
Jun 11, 2019 -
Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story
Thank you so much. I appreciate the comment! ^^ That%u2019s actually a good point and I guess I knew it would be a problem when writing it. Basically when I ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story
Thank you so much. I appreciate the comment! ^^ That%u2019s actually a good point and I guess I knew it would be a problem when writing it. Basically when I ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story
Thank you so much. I appreciate the comment! ^^ That%u2019s actually a good point and I guess I knew it would be a problem when writing it. Basically when I ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story
I see, yes. You%u2019re totally right. I%u2019ve been having a look over it recently to see what I can do with it. Thank you very much for your input and ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story
Ah, I see. I kinda felt that as I was writing but I wasn't entirely sure how to correct it... I'll have to take another look at it. Thank you ...
Aug 25, 2018 -
Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story
Thank you! I appreciate you saying so. :))
Aug 25, 2018 -
Re: Pain
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Aug 17, 2018
Wow. I really enjoyed this! The way you use your words is so poetic and captivating - I was hooked from beginning to end! The imagery here is so powerful ...
