Gypsianna

I like it.:)

Agreed. 100%.

Ah, thank you. Very helpful criticism. I can NOT believe I called Danny, Davy. Thanks for catching that!

Thanks, and that's a first for me! I mean what you said about spelling errors--I usually have tons! I'll post more as soon as possible!

Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it! I had a good teacher. I will post more as soon as I get it typed up!

Glad to know you liked it and want more! Everyone commented on my words (or rather the like thereof) being confusing! I guess it must be pretty bad! I'll try ...

Thanks! I usually have trouble with titles but this one was pretty straight forward!:) Thanks for telling me about my 'disappearing words' problem, as I said to cha3739: really bad ...

Thanks! I know I'm really bad about commas and stuff, but I always seem to miss it! I rarely notice typos in books because my brain just supplies the missing ...

Tsk, tsk. Naughty little Grayson! This is hilarious! I love comical 'spy' stories.:) I didn't notice any mistakes either! Great job!