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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Voices (edited)

    I thought the story was written was really neat. Although some confusing parts: "We pulled up to the mall and she slapped twenty bucks into my hand, giving me the ...

    Jul 4, 2010


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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