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Re: Thoughts
your poem is like a painting that paints a night picture into my thoughts... just like the title itself suggests! :) all of us have their own style as they ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: The Wanderer
I started writing a story in the midst of the night. I was just beginning when sleepiness got the better of me, and on the empty pages of my story, ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Midnight Stray Child
The midnight child has left his home, for they have pushed him out alone, the nightly wind would pass him by, like falling stars across the sky the moon would ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Light
Stars appear on velvet sky as those cheerful sun beams fade. They wave the sunny rays goodbye and in the darkness, they stayed. The western sky is turning dark, now ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Light
Stars appear on velvet sky as those cheerful sun beams fade. They wave the sunny rays goodbye and in the darkness, they stayed. The western sky is turning dark, now ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: The Sparrow's Nest
When you grow up and fledge your wings, you'll find a wider world of things, you'll leave this place where we once stood, but don't you leave me here for ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Autmn Leaves
hahaha of course it's obvious.... autumn.... haha...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: The Wildflower
man.... those comments hurt me a lot...... most of these are one-sided comments... they only tell what you think and not what the writer thinksssss all people are different... our ...
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: The Wildflower
The Wildflower As I was walking by the sea, I saw a curious thing to me, A flower growing in the sand, Of all, why in this wretched land? I ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Autmn Leaves
Ac h ing branches let leaves fall On c old and empty ground Th u s orange-tinted leaves of all En m esh their tears around Da y s of ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Autmn Leaves
i know its secret..... read every 3rd letter of every line backwards....... it says "i love you very much" sweet princess.....
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Time
man.... i really did not think it would be that good.... thanks for all your comments.. i hope i'll be a better poet someday.... all because of your comments! thanks ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Time
yes, i admit some lines are a bit off course... that's because i meant to make it an acrostic... otherwise the acrostic would have been ruined...
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: A poem on the general stupidness of the human race.
hey.. do you hate humans? i hate them.... i agree with your work.... great job
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Time
thanks... never thought you'd think it's that good...
Nov 7, 2010
