GryphonFledgling

This piece just killed me. It was utterly amazing and just rent my heart. The ending sentence devastated me, but at the same time, it confused me. You mention earlier ...

7/10 It's pretty, but I can't quite make it completely out.

3/6/08 039 – Taste There should be a metallic taste of blood in my mouth as I chew on my lip, but it isn't there. They’ve gone for now, but ...

My answer would be: make you a different person. At the risk of sounding like a broken record, acting like your character for a week would probably land you in ...

Nope, still confused. But this was beautiful. Still a bit purple prose-y, but amazing. As white as a woman's thighs. So... There aren't any black women in this new world? ...

Hello, stopping by for part II. I feel bad, not realizing that this was a sequel to something else. I thought perhaps there could be a relationship, since the titles ...

The beginning of this was really great. I loved the immediacy of how you put him at the point of dying before you started the story. It sounded like such ...

Ooh, this looks like it could be interesting. Biblical names important much? This could be longer and more involved. Describe the party and why it is so fun. Give little ...

*eyes Prok* No, I think you're going to bed. Like, right now. This was exceptional. Odd, yes, but extremely amusing and original. I don't know how to critique something like ...

Ooh, very interesting. This was a great beginning. Not much happens, but the voice was so intriguing to me that I just had to keep reading. The red "scarlet"s were ...

Very nice. Seriously, you are dazzling me with this story. I love the characters and the plotline and your writing. a vane sacrifice. Yeah, I think this should be "vain". ...

Happy B-day! Happy Birthday to you! You live in a zoo! You act like two monkeys And smell like them too! It's appropriate since I'm operating from "Chimped Out." ;) ...

Ooh, very interesting. I like the post-apocalyptic feel to it. The quote at the beginning was just haunting. Picasso was a little morbid. Omigosh, do you have a lot of ...

Okay, I'm in awe of Sam now. *bows* I'm not much of one for experimental fiction, but you are bringing me around. It make take time and be a painful ...

10/10 - and I am a Bat fan. Quite funny. I actually laughed out loud. :)