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GryphonFledgling

  • Fantasy Novels Re: Redemption - Prologue/Chapter 1

    *blink* Wow. This was good. I'll admit I was expecting some angsty story from the first few lines, but this actually turned out really good. I cared about the woman ...

    Jan 2, 2009
  • General Articles Re: Writing is Pain

    Yup yup yup, I feel your pain. I actually just wrote my own drivel about fighting with my "headvoice". (Speaking of which, that has got to be the best name ...

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The really short story

    Well, hello again! Of course I remember you and I am more than happy to leave you a review! It seems as though everyone else has nitpicked this quite a ...

    Jan 1, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The End

    Omigoodness, it's over. :( Okieday, certainly a smash-bang finale. The intensity in this one just did not stop. Very very nice. Yay for gratuitous blood and fire! It felt like ...

    Dec 31, 2008
  • Writing Tips Re: If you're really struggling...

    Pssh, who needs proper paragraphs? Yeah, my tip is the same - persevere. Maybe take a break from it for a few days, stop stressing about it, then start again. ...

    Dec 30, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Have you ever seen yourself as the Random Member?

    Yes, I have actually. I logged on and was wondering why my avatar was showing up twice on the main page. Then I realized that was me! On "Random Member"! ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Zombie Days #1

    Finally! For some reason, it took me forever to find this after spending the entire month of November waiting for you to post it somewhere and then sort of forgetting ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: What Real Vampires Would Do

    Ooh, very nice. I loved the relationship between the two characters. Seriously. The whole "Twilight"-bashing thing is getting a little old for me (even though I don't like "Twilight") and ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Writing Tips Re: Need Help Writing a Basic Review?

    Oh, I wish this had been here when I started reviewing so long ago. I try to cover as much of this as possible, after having done a lot of ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]

    Banned for having such a great avatar of everyone's real favorite Edward - the one with scissor hands!

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Finders, Keepers

    The whole situation made me grin. Poor guy, picked up because of a misunderstanding. But let it be a lesson to him: always turn in random envelopes of money found ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The long short story

    Well, hello there and welcome to YWS! I'm GryphonFledgling and I'll be your reviewer today! A couple things right off the bat: 1) You're 13? *oogles* Your writing is so ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban The User Above You! [3]

    Banned for having Roman numerals in your signature.

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Where do you read?

    I generally read laying on my side in my bed, holding the book up with one hand on its side so I can read it while horizontal. Or I just ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Scoffing at the Inside Self

    Katie stared at her inner editor across the vast dusty span of the street. The sun glinted in her eyes, causing her to squint and putting her at a disadvantage. ...

    Dec 26, 2008


Never use your shield as a dinner plate, for that is when the enemy is most likely to attack.
— The KotGR Commander