GryphonFledgling

You know, I never noticed... *peers closely* I even turned on the magnifier and I still can't tell. What is that thing?

Banned for not being named Joseph.

Ooh! Shiny! *pokes* I loved "follow the stars" and "writing a whole new world" the best. Way awesome. "Creation" was pretty cool too. Seriously neat looking. Don't know much about ...

Banned for only having 26 reviews.

I must say, this was one of the funnier Twilight-bashing stories I've seen. Nate totally is a fangirl magnet. At least he exists. And he brought us YWS! Nate: 2 ...

1, 3 and 6 were my favorites. 1) The transparency of the ice against the black was just utterly amazing. Perhaps you could crop out the roof? Way cool in ...

Ooh, I liked the snake's head. Really, that was pretty cool. His heads look wolf-like (the expressions on them are pure win, my friend), but his body reminds me of ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! Whoa, talk about throwing us into the action immediately. It's a nice hook, but the problem is that we don't know anything about these characters, ...

This was sweet. I liked it. My biggest critique would be on the mother: she comes across so much like a stereotypical witch. I mean, you have her cackling at ...

I loved the menthol paste! Seriously, if that isn't the coolest solution I have ever heard, I don't know what is! I've actually done this before, though I don't remember ...

Wow, even better than the first one by way of character and world building! I'm liking it better and better! --- I noticed something that you do both in this ...

The tone for this piece was kind of slow, despite the frenetic scene of a club it is describing. It comes across kind of dull and bored. And it completely ...

10/20/08 027 – Parents I don’t know anything. I’m telling you. ---- Well turn the damn thing on! ---- Yes, and I am telling you I am completely prepared to ...

This looks hugely familiar. Where have I read this before? Really, I remember reading this exact things somewhere before... Some other website, perhaps? *scratches head* “Zut, what is that?” I ...

This was so sad. I reacted rather strongly at the end, because you spent so much time describing the creation of this letter, only to destroy it in the end. ...