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Re: Dinosaur in the Attic
This is beautiful! The prose is really thick and meaty and I think if you tried to write an entire novel exactly like this, it might be too much, but ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: Rose of The West (pt. 1)
*pokes* Shiny. Hello, this would be GryphonFledgling and I am here to review this Collaboration of the Century. I come prepared to be dazzled. *has high expectations* Not more than ...
Jul 8, 2009 -
Re: One of the Funnest Generators I've Seen Floating Around
Honestly, the first thing I thought of when I read the title of this thread was a literal flying electric generator... Yeah... (a version of which apparently exists! I looked ...
Jul 5, 2009 -
Re: Number of Characters
I see that almost everyone on YWS has lots of important characters, and I don't. And ideas on how I can have more characters? My last NaNo had two main ...
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: SKill vs. Soul?
Both.
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Where are you writing?
Notebook/Word writer here! *waves* I have two notebooks: my writing journal and my writing notebook. Actually, I call them both "writing notebook" but I know what I am talking about. ...
Jul 2, 2009 -
Re: Which "said" words do you use?
*huggles "said"* I actually use more of your "sometimes" category more often than your "less often" category... Interesting... When I write, my teacher always told us to use 'said' as ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [4]
Banned for being Canadian, eh?
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
Knit
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Flowah Powah
Flowers? Yes, please! Ooh, I like the cleverness of the last one. And yet, it still is beautiful. 1, 2, 7 and 10 are my favorites. Very nice quotes all ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: Stevie
Wow... The angle on this thing is wicked awesome. And the color is amazing. *squee* Mucho likey. My only criticisms would be: 1) The perspective on the gun looks a ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: When Death Comes A'knocking.
Wow, this was good. It was funny too, in a dark way. Very nice. The mindreading was done very subtly. It can too easily be made cheesy, but you worked ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: [Deleted]
Hello there! I'm GryphonFledgling and I'll be your reviewer today! This was well-written and pretty solid grammatically, but it felt a little description heavy. There's very little action and a ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: I drew an Old Man...
Argh! I'm so jealous of you! Getting anything that looks remotely like art out of charcoal is impossible for me. It smudges and doesn't erase... Gah... Anyway, people have already ...
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: Fonts
Times New Roman, Courier New and Georgia. Though I usually just use TNR 'cuz that's what my computer is set to and I'm too lazy to change fonts. Though Courier ...
Jun 14, 2009
