GryphonFledgling

Part 1 ---- ACT 3 INT. KIM’S HOUSE - KIM’S BEDROOM - NIGHT Kim wakes up, laying on her bed. She looks around without moving and sees nothing. KIM: That ...

O.O That little subtab thing for "Recent Additions" is so awesome! Makes my life and searching for new, unreviewed works so much easier.

You get a pocket copy of "The Complete Works of Charles Dickens". -inserts coin-

7/10 - It's so pretty and delicate.

FADE IN: INT: ABANDONED PARKING GARAGE - NIGHT Dark and musty abandoned parking garage. A cockroach scuttles about on the dirty concrete floor. Two empty tattered cardboard boxes rest on ...

I'm just curious. I print everything, though my print is sort of cursive-y anyway (which drives my mother crazy for some reason). Whether or not other people can read it ...

This was cool. Simple and short, but very neat. I loved the language in it. In terms of critiquing, the style change from the meditation of chalk to the scene ...

Ooh, I like the idea behind this... So much potential. A couple of notes: 1) You jump into the action so fast with this story that I don't really have ...

Yeah, I know how that whole things goes with moving and having no one you know... It pretty much sucks. Welcome to YWS! The community of writers that will never ...

Very disappointed. Having YWS down for a week made me realize just how much I need it... Also Nate, I agree that you should get the poll somewhere busy. Having ...

This is beautiful. I'm not a poetry critic, so I can't really give you much constructive criticism, but I just had to say that I found this so lovely. It ...

Interesting. I like the idea. It really looks like it has potential. And, omigosh, but I loved the little conversation on readers. It is so true. So true. Your dialogue ...

LittleGreenPwner: :D Made of win, that right there. Very, very nice. I love how you treat the lightsaber battles. And Jango Fett... Oh gosh, I laughed my butt off at ...

Omigosh, I love it! Yeah, not much intelligent to say from me. The sheer awesomeness that is this fic has drained it all out of me. Actually, one thing: I ...

Actually, I very rarely describe my characters at all, but that's just my writing style. What I pretty much do is give a line or two when you first see ...