GryphonFledgling

The sun? Amirite? Will you ever tell us? Anyway, I liked this. The imagery was actually kind of cool. The rhyme scheme seemed a little wonky though. Sometimes every other ...

Ballet

In the first instance ever of me actually having mentally cast an actor for a character I wrote, Cillian Murphy would be my ideal Ted. Partially because Ted is based ...

ACT 3 INT. OFFICE BUILDING - ELEVATOR - DAY Ted and Kim are standing on opposite sides of the elevator. Ted sidles closer to Kim. TED: Hmmm? So what’s he ...

*points at Sureal and magnus's comments* What they said. I personally like italics best, but any of those ways will work.

When I get in a bind like this, I tend to turn to writing prompt sites. I can go through a lot of useless ones before I find something I ...

A cautionary note I'd like to interject, just because it has been worrying me: Review. Review by all means. But make sure it is a meaningful review and not just ...

This was strange, and yet beautiful. I liked the voice and the imagery was beautiful. I have to agree with Elinor, however, in that it felt a lot like poetry ...

This is lovely. I don't really have a lot to say, seeing as how this is just sort of an introduction to the characters, but it is wonderful. I actually ...

I didn't know it was Bacon Day, but you know what? I actually ate bacon that day! Spoooooky...

I said "cats" because they're the under dog (*cough*) in this poll. That said, I own 3 cats and 2 dogs. I love them both. But I know that, while ...

FADE IN INT. KIM’S HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - DAY Ted, dressed in a pink housecoat, with sleep-tousled hair, is drinking a cup of coffee. PHOTOGRAPHS of Kim and her ...

Whenever I click on a folder in any portfolio (I tried this with somebody else's, then mine), this error shows up under the folders: General Error SQL ERROR [ mysql4 ...

I see the whole thing mostly like a movie, sometimes like a memory. And I very rarely visualize faces. In fact, I very rarely actually cement a character's appearance in ...

*stares* These are... beautiful. Strange, but beautiful. 1) My favorite. What exactly happened to it? The angle and focus is pretty cool. 2) The colors are awesome in contrast to ...