GryphonFledgling

Way awesomesauce. 1) I am envious of your motocross skills. 2) I love the spray of dirt. I know it's not added or anything, but it manages to look so ...

Wow, I'm having a hard time thinking up actual books that I hate and not going through and defending every favorite of mine that I see on someone else's hate ...

FADE IN INT. KIM’S HOUSE – KIM’S BEDROOM – NIGHT Kim is lying in bed, asleep. TED (O.S.): This is turning out to be easier than I thought. CAT (O.S.) ...

This is... beautiful. It reads wonderfully, like poetry, event through the descriptions. I don't have much to say in terms of criticism, due to it being such a small piece ...

I'll just give you my method for last year's NaNo. I pretty much: 1) Have an idea. Yeah... 2) Start writing on November 1. 3) About a few days in, ...

*cowers beneath the Finnish influence*

Wow. Action girl much? 1) This concerns me a little actually. You're going from Mariadelle being a noble and lady, if a little jealous. She is pretty much verbally fiery, ...

*squee* Quite lovely. I am enthralled!

Butter

Ooh, fishy! I like the colors of both the fish and the water, and the designs on the fish are pretty cool. The eye doesn't look like a fish eye, ...

This section was my least favorite. That said, it was still amazing... 1) It just sort of felt like it dragged. I mean, not a whole lot happened and it ...

Ooh, the romantic intrigue continues... 1) The whole bit with Mariadelle doing her own hair and clothes felt weird. Yes, the maid pops in to ask about helping her, but ...

Whoa... Seems like no one is what I first expected them to be. Prince Kharles? Cad. Eloise? Juvenile witch. Duke Warrington? Arrogant cad. Raymond... I'm not really sure. Leading to... ...

Again, probably just repeating everything everyone has already said. And yet I forge ahead. 1) I love how Mariadelle is a bit of a jealous witch. She's not completely contemptible ...

Probably just repeating what everyone else has said (being a newcomer and all to the story), but I had to just say some stuff. 1) I love, love, love how ...