GryphonFledgling

Honest to god, I'd rather date House. There are many people that would rather date House. *wiggles eyebrows* No, really, I have no problem with escapism. That's why I read. ...

Sorry, double posted somehow.

A good vampire-human couple should be dark, disturbing, wrong and frakked up on so many levels, and it should be treated as such. We all agree Edward/Bella is not the ...

This was lovely. It felt so claustrophobic and strained, like it was going to explode any minute. I think the formatting had a lot to do with it, so I ...

Okay: Your title grabbed me from the getgo. I can see now you were just sort of throwing in words involved in your stories, but it really hooked me from ...

The flashbacks confused me a little in this story, because they led me to not be sure just exactly when things were happening. In the beginning, Mary talks about how ...

That's so friggin' amazing! Lulz and all that. I knew there was a catch to it... somewhere. Grif, you evil, evil person. And Snoink, that link was da bomb!

Hey hi and welcome to Young Writer's Society! Why could he do this? I guess this sentence makes sense, but it sounds a little funny. Plus, combined with the next ...

Very nice. I loved the way you began already in the middle of a speech. It was kind of a cool way to throw the reader right into the poem. ...

I'm fairly at peace with Eragon and the rest of the colored bricks. I'm willing to allow them to continue to exist and even read them sometimes for the kicks ...

*pokes* Ooh, shiny. Even in such a short piece, I loved the character interplay between these two. Really, it just sort of clicks right away and keeps going. Very nice. ...

Wow. This was great. Lovely bit of character study and to have it about writing is all the more amazing! *whoot* A quick nitpick: When you have a description of ...

This is... beautiful. It just has this air to it of fragile surreality, with something really sinister and soft sort of lurking in the background. Really, very lovely. I'm not ...

This was lovely. Going into it, I was all like "No pronouns? Oh noes... This will end badly" and yet you managed to pull it off almsot completely naturally. There ...

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