GryphonFledgling

You poor dear. We need to fly you out to see some snow somewhere. -texture Depends on the weather. When it's really cold out, it's almost like powdered sugar or ...

Whoa, suddenly the pace picks up. My main criticism would be how quick Kari is with everything. What made her jump so quickly to the conclusion that Lorna was the ...

'Allo, 'allo, I am back to review once again. Seems my comment about the parentheses in my first review was unneeded. The parentheses do indeed seem to become a device ...

Hey hi! I've been meaning to review this as the newer chapters have come out, so this is me starting from the beginning. It seems like everyone else covered this ...

Oooh, I likes this. My major criticism would be the discrepancy between the character's narrating voice and the character's actual speaking voice. Her narration sounds rather erudite and educated, whi

RSVP, baby.

Ooh! Greek myth retellings! Shiny. I don't believe I felt remorse when my mother told us. How could we when our first memories were of cold stone, harsh words, and ...

Well now... Part Two. To be honest, this didn't sit so well with me as much as the first part did. That said, it is still wonderful It just seems ...

In the same boat as lilymoore there: saw part two and figured I might as well do it justice by reading part one. *blink* This was... lovely. The inter-cutting of ...

Omigosh, is this the perfect way to make my return or what?! *scuttles off to review madly*

Hey hi! I'm GryphonFledgling and I'll be your reviewer today. Elena sat on a floor of what looked and smelled like some rusty old prison. I know what you mean ...

*moved to Fiction Discussion and Tips*

Your writing is really solid grammatically and I like the whole idea you are setting up, but this sort of feels like a summary of the action rather than the ...

Sent and received. Glad you liked it, Juniper! And omigosh, Mr.Knightley, but it was awesome incarnate! Yay for NaNo! Merry Christmas or happy holiday of your choice to everybody!

Reeve stood outside the operating room as the doctors moved around the table. Finally one broke off from the cluster and came to the door. Reeve waited impatiently as she ...