GryphonFledgling

A quick update time is essential. Even if a reader really, really liked your story and wants to read more, if you take forever to put it up, they might ...

I - I'm not sure what to say about this piece other than that it was lovely. It just sort of carried me along in this beautiful daze and by ...

It's funny, but all of the things you listed as being unsure of are the things I loved most about this story. The dryness of the paragraphs is something I ...

O.o I read the title as "Snogmaggedon" and thought perhaps this was some sort of photodump of people kissing. I was pleasantly proven wrong. Omigoodness, I love these! The two ...

Lulz. Realized I didn't give you a topic when I asked for one. Sorry. Possibly included (doesn't have to be all, but I figured it might get you started): Eyes, ...

Wait... It isn't real? *sobs*

It's actually Chinese, not Japanese. The reasoning is just that China has the largest population of Internet users. Appealing to that demographic would be very beneficial to YWS. Nice how ...

*whew* That's a bit easier on the eyes there and much easier to review. Thankies! Okay, review time. This story reminded me a bit of The New York Trilogy by ...

I said it before in the other thread about this, but I'll say it again: Instead of touting this crusade as just "anti-novel", I think we should try and make ...

A mod round of Butter Beer on me!

That. Is. Awesome. Me please?

Shiiiiiny. Seriously, that was awesome. The twist at the end is completely unexpected, but makes perfet sense in hindsight. Very, very nice. Two small steps, steady and sure, finds him ...

Hello there! Wow. This was amazing. I especially loved the voice of the narrator in the prologue. Really heartwrenching in all of its confusion and anger. *thumbs up* Some quick ...

Rape + Child audience = :? Kinda difficult, this one. Does it have to be a rape scene? I see your dilemma, but in light of the fact that you ...

ZOMG, Princess Mononoke ! *spaz* As for your question, I think a lot of it has to do with characters and setting. Running with your example of Mononoke , some ...