GryphonFledgling

Hello there! I was a little confused by their relationship in this piece. Is it before they've met? Has Trista had experiences with non-humans before. Darian makes some comment about ...

Hmmm... I've seen this around, but haven't read it yet. You make me want to do so.

Laura would be one of the the hostages asking him not to kill her. Clark would try to calmly talk the robber down. Baddie refuses. Clark pulls out a gun, ...

I had a character once who was an empath who tried to kill himself once because he was so inundated with everything that people were feeling. He didn't get any ...

*like* A thousand times *like*! The abuse of number 7 is something that drives me up the wall in speculative fiction.

I can't seem to log onto chat. The first day (I think) of the recent change, I hit "enter chat room" on the YWS homepage and it took me straight ...

After all, have you ever met someone with ugly eyes? I was just going to say this. Seriously, I have yet to meet someone with ugly eyes. They might seem ...

I found the "not talking" kind of interesting. It confused me at first, but after a while, I just ran with it and found it pretty cool. The café was ...

Omigosh, this is sooo cool! *flail*

'Allo! That guy was the only sole soul on the street. I like the voice you have for this character, but this particular line was a little silly. "Only" and ...

Hey hi. Watch the all-caps in your title, m'kay?

He's a coal dust speck, isn't he? He has my vote in any case.

Whoa, was this like a Clockwork Orange / Akira crossover? Sweet... Dear Master, who art in the sky, prayed silently Elisha, glory to your power, save your poor slave Elisha. ...

I got mine! It is so lovely! *luffs*

Hey there and welcome to YWS! Hap and metalamor have already commented on the melodramaticness of the prose, so I won't. I did really like the duality of the heroine: ...