GryphonFledgling

Erm, I'd have to disagree with 3B in that this one is easier to follow. I had a bit of a harder time in this one, what with the abstract ...

I agree with Stella: what does it feel like to be back in the game, whether or not he is uncomfortable with his surroundings. Is it like bicycle: you never ...

Ha! I was wondering why she wasn't freaking out more. But I guess in dreams, stuff either makes sense, doesn't scare you as much as it should, or scares you ...

Eee, I'm going to sound a little bit like Jiggity up above me. I do think that this was a little overwritten. You make a point and then kind of ...

Yes, randomness. I found this after having forgotten about it for about 4 or 5 years. I put it up for your enjoyment. Think about it: this is how funny ...

I dunno. I think I'd be scared to have Henry in love with me. He sounds, from this piece, like the kind that could very easily turn into a stalker. ...

I'd have to agree. As pathetic as it sounds, long passages of internet writing tend to daunt people, myself included. For some reason, long internet posts are not regarded with ...

What else would they jump off of? Ninjas or pirates?

Because you hate pineapple. Why can't penguins fly?

Aww, this was really sad. I liked it though. Did D addy burn breakfast? When used as a proper name (like kids referring to their parents) it should be capitalized. ...

Awwww. Yeah, it was one of those pieces that just makes you go *squee*. Nice stuff. But the writer in me must engage. This was really short. It was really ...

Hey and welcome to YWS! XxxDo did a pretty good job of editing, so I won't repeat what was so masterfully covered. My big thing is about your description: where ...

Really, really great. It wasn't what I expected at all and it was wonderfully written. I was a little confused about the card on the window, though. Maybe I'm missing ...

The Mutts pieces don't have to be read in order. They're written in random order out of a list of 100 one-word prompts in a challenge found on LiveJournal (PM ...

7/10 "Warriors" reference! I remember that series! -- I guess for mine you have to have watched "Labyrinth"... Do so!