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Er, I agree with sday about the spelling out of the name. But otherwise, I didn't notice anything. About the actual story: I liked the idea, but I have to ...

Hello, hello... Dropping in for a review. Wow. That was seriously the first thing that came to my mind. Wow. This was really amazing. I liked how the girl finally ...

My only complaint about this piece was that it was too short. I really loved the language and the relationship between the two characters. It was just magnificent. The one ...

3/5/08 090 – Home So much has changed since I left. My grandpa told me about how his grandpa told him about the days when kids ran down the street ...

Don't we all?

What do you mean you "aren't a writer"? This was really great! I liked the way you set up the beginning. I was hooked from the first sentence. Only think ...

Hey there, and welcome to YWS! Whoa doggie... That is one honkin' big entry. I read the entire thing, but as a word of advice, you're more likely to get ...

Aw, Nikola once more. I liked him a lot in the last chapter in his viewpoint and the like continues into this one. Very nice. My one question would be ...

Geez. Paul is crazy. Okay, there was a lot of violence in this chapter, but, much like the last chapter, I really didn't get a reason for it. It seems ...

It just keeps on coming, don't it? Nitpicks ensue: closer to Bobby 's body how could that be ? All my effort was in vain . I was still press ...

Toothpaste. You find phones in houses and you use toothpaste to wash away the soda from the cans. House/Phone = most people have them Soda Can/Toothpaste = involve mouths And ...

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Hello there. A little late on the ball with welcoming you, I suppose, but what the heck... A sci-fi writer? Most excellent. Is sci-fi your preferred genre (you mentioned a ...

Username: 75% - It's strange how the two words go together so nicely Signature: 89% - Much coolness... Custom Title: 75% - Pretty... Avatar: 90% - Hobbes! But... I can't ...

Other people have gotten to the nitpicks before me... Meh... Anyway, I agree with Kylan on Caleb's gift of the rose. While I get that it is going along with ...