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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Possession

    Seriously, I'm with Demeter. What do you mean "not that scary"?! Geez, this was the scariest one! The mood was so much creepier in this one. The other two were ...

    Jul 15, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Ouija Board

    Ooh, very nice. Scary stuff is developing here. 'K, this one was much better than the first by way of characterization, but at the same time, it felt really rushed. ...

    Jul 15, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Séance

    Hello there... I've seen this around many times but was always doing something else at that moment and so couldn't be spared, then I would forget. But now, I have ...

    Jul 15, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you!

    Friend

    Jul 15, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Questions Only

    Wouldn't the forum be nonexistent then?

    Jul 15, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The List

    Ha, I didn't even realize how long it was until near the end, when I happened to glance at the scroll bar. It sucked me right in. This reminds me ...

    Jul 15, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Kate Has 8 Lives. Chapter 2.

    Aw, see? You can be a hardened criminal and still love fluffy animals! ;) Anyway, actual review time. I liked this, since we get to see that she isn't a ...

    Jul 15, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: What the Silence Screams

    This was an interesting beginning. I liked the descriptions you had and you set up an intriguing situation. We don't know much about the boy, however, so we aren't inclined ...

    Jul 15, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Anyone seen the Indiana Jones movie 'The crystal skulls'

    I'm torn in my opinion of this movie. It was classic Indy fun, but at the same time, there was stuff that just drove me crazy. I was annoyed by ...

    Jul 15, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Once upon a Time- Chapter One

    Ugh, geez. I was totally not expecting it to play out like that. (it comes of ignoring ratings, I suppose.) It was horribly graphic and sickening, yet totally absorbing. I ...

    Jul 14, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Our dog, SHilo. any good?

    I'm sorry about your dog. I had to put my cat down, so I can imagine how you might feel. The picture is really nice. I liked the way you ...

    Jul 14, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Silver Flame

    Interesting hook, but did you have to end it so soon!? I'm interested! So what happens next? Yeah, that'd be my main gripe with this piece, in that it was ...

    Jul 14, 2008
  • Scripts Re: The House of Straw

    This was really sad and extremely powerful. It was interesting how you had two characters but only one actor. I could see it working on screen in order to make ...

    Jul 14, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Kate Has 8 Lives.

    Wow, I don't know how to follow a review like those of everyone else above me. I disagree with clograbby on one point: (also, mom shouldn't be capitilized. When used ...

    Jul 13, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Window

    Ooh. Someone's a bit of a nut job. *eyes Marshal warily* He's going to snap any time. Very nice stuff here. The only thing I found to comment was that ...

    Jul 13, 2008


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