Gryffindor13

Beautiful! I don't have a single criticism. It was just beautiful!

Wow. First things first. Violent much? It kind of scared me, to tell you the truth. It came across as, well, violent and kinda mean. But honestly, if you wrote ...

Wow. This was a great chapter. It caught my interest immediatley. I can't find much to critique. Only one thing: Yesterday, I managed to make it to Sunday School but ...

I didn't fully understand it (sorry :( ) But I did like bits and peices of it. I especially liked these lines: The serene rigidity and straight edged silhouette of ...

That was great! It was funny, intriguing and fantastical! I loved it. For me, it could have gone on forever! That's the sign of a really good story :D I ...

Wow. This was really good! It caught my attention immediatley, which isn't always easy. The description you used was great and the characters seemed real. “Like I would put anything ...

This was really good! It really drew me in early. The dialogue you use seems so real, like things people would say to each other in reality. I find that ...

I got it! Thank you guys sooooo much!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

004 (300x260).jpg 141 (300x219).jpg 007 (300x188).jpg So these are me three photos. (1) The Natural World (2) Love (3) Peace. I used a Canon PowerShot SD 12000 IS. I'm not ...

How big are they supposed to be?

Wow. That's really deep. I don't think it's depressing per-say, but I think it's heartbreaking. Something this true, with this kind of emotion can hardly be critiqued.

OK so I just went and tried it....and it didn't work :( I don't know what I did wrong :(

Thank you so much!! :D :D :D

Beautiful! Absolutley beautiful! Your poem has such a deep, strong message that I got it immediatley (which is rare with me and poetry). I love it! I can't find anything ...

Can anyone help me? I can't figure out how to submit some photos. So I know that I have to click on the submit tab then I choseart & photography ...