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Gringoamericano

Guero with a Sombrero

  • Script » General, Film Re: The $3.50 Lifestyle

    Yeah, sorry about the grammar mistakes throughout the script. The whole thing was written at the last minute before a deadline. The "bottom 50" comment was meant as "bottom 50 ...

    Dec 11, 2014
  • Script » General, Film Re: The $3.50 Lifestyle

    Sorry about the wonky formatting, YWS can't handle film scripts, so it's being hosted on a separate site until further notice. Anyways, this story was written in a grand total ...

    Dec 10, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Consequences of Owning a Terrible Sweater

    Thank you very much for the review. And when you say that the story was confusing, did you mean that the plot was a bit confusing (which was somewhat deliberate), ...

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Consequences of Owning a Terrible Sweater

    Because I find watching people get mad on the internet hilarious.

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Consequences of Owning a Terrible Sweater

    Thank you very much for reading this. I admit, that I tried too hard to develop all the scenery and the twist, that I forgot to come up with a ...

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Consequences of Owning a Terrible Sweater

    Stop What?

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Consequences of Owning a Terrible Sweater

    I think this has earned the courtesy of being called "The worst thing I've ever read on this site". I mean really, You'd be possible. You know about the hell. ...

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical Re: Macarena (A Poem From A Hipster's Point of View)

    Hey man, I'm glad you liked it. While your poem definitely (and I know this may sound a bit rude) bothered me enough to get me to write something (and ...

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical Re: Macarena (A Poem From A Hipster's Point of View)

    Thank you for the review, and I'm glad you liked it. However, the point isn't that music used to suck. In fact, that's the last thing I was trying to ...

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical Re: Macarena (A Poem From A Hipster's Point of View)

    Just in case my point hasn't been made clear enough in the body of work, here it is: All the problems with rap that Strange addressed in the poem "Twerk" ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy Re: How to kill a wizard: Chapter 2

    Thank you very much for the review. And much like you I also had no idea where the story was going. Hell, I didn't even know what Alan's role in ...

    Jul 16, 2013
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: Let's buy a Death Permit!

    Glad you enjoyed it! And good luck with your friends.

    Oct 27, 2012
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: Let's buy a Death Permit!

    Thank you for the review. I didn't really delve much further into the pop-culture of the story's setting, as it didn't really seem relevant. However, setting it in an alternate ...

    Oct 25, 2012
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: Let's buy a Death Permit!

    Thank you for the review. To be honest, I'm not really good at writing characters. I just create my little world or concept, and then I end up filling it ...

    Oct 20, 2012
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: Let's buy a Death Permit!

    Thank you for the review. I'm not very fond of the plot and characters as well. I had the entire setting vividly worked out in my head, but then I ...

    Oct 17, 2012


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