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Roger was hanging on the 2nd story windowsill, trying to climb inside. He almost freaked out when he saw a spider crawl on his left hand. Then another crawled onto ...

Wouldn't anybody notice that the same man has been running the agency for a very long time, yet does not appear to have aged at all? Maybe your character could've ...

Roger - Roger wandered around the perimeter in the base, looking for an open window or something. He found one at the back....on the second story. I'm gonna hate this ...

Roger doesn't know that. That being said, he'll freak out and run the second he sees even one, let alone a hundred of them.

Roger - Roger couldn't believe his eyes. He had wandered in a complete circle right back to the base. He thought for a second,wandering what to do next. He could ...

@ItalianIlluminist Yeah....I did away with the whole "enchantment caster" class because it made absolutely no sense. Therefore, immortality in anyone other than vampires would be impossible. Even then

For years, wizards have existed alongside humans, hidden under a veil of secrecy. They've oppressed by a government agency that constantly watches them and aims to keep them a secret, ...

Roger - " Dammit, dammit, dammit ", Roger muttered to himself as he walked through the middle of nowhere. During the encounter in the evil Animal Shifter's base, Roger locked ...

Roger It appeared that shit had just hit the fan. Hunter is bleeding out right in front of me, that Brighton guy is skipping towards us... Well, it looks he's ...

@ItalianIlluminist Hunter is a character's name, not a class or ranking.

@ItalianIlluminist be honest, I don't know. I never thought that anybody would ever actually join the agency (because the thought of jerkass wizards seems to be very unpopular here), let ...

That would be allowed

Well, I'm not okay with the character fully mastering enchantments, as the fact that he's lived for hundreds of years is already pushing it. That, and the enchantments are meant ...

@ItalianIlluminist While I didn't approve of your character at first, the thought of a wizard running the agency seems like a very good plot twist.

Hooray, I can finally resort to my usual style of writing: Making a story about characters pointing out and working off of plot holes. Holy crap, I was right....maybe. , ...