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thank you. and i mad the small change. i didn't notice i left that in

Part 2 of Chapter 5 is going up in a few

part two of chapter 5 is going up in a few

Part to coming soon ???

I'm glad you enjoyed the first part. Sorry for going 'ghost.' It's been a bit hot where I live, and heat exhaustion takes its toll after work. I appreciate constructive ...

Thank you for the words of kindness i'm still working on the book been battling heat esoti9on after work so not the need power nap after wok not much time ...

I didn't think of some of the other things like the healing and what state they would be in Chapter 5 is in final editing and it's going to be ...

if you're interested I just updated chapter 1-3 and there is a new chapter you should give it a reread

if you're interested I just updated chapter 1-3 and there is a new chapter you should give it a reread

if you're interested I just updated chapter 1-3 and there is a new chapter you should give it a reread

if you're interested I just updated chapter 1-3 and there is a new chapter you should give it a reread

Thank you, thank you! Book one is currently in pre-editing, and the things I have posted here are somewhat raw. I am preparing to send it to my editor, and ...

Thank you for your constructive feedback is much appreciated. If you're interested chapters two and three as well