GreyMatter

And by the way, I didn't care much for the prompt as hunger and homelessness are in focus, not fear.

Bhai bata bhi deta kya grammatical errors hai aur kaha pronouns clear nahi hai!

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This poem, in my opinion, gives a slightly exaggerated account of what has been portrayed. Apart from that, it is a nice poem. It felt repetitive but I suppose that ...

Your suggestions are duly noted. I will edit it. Thanks for reviewing.

Thank you for your review. Your words mean a lot to me. I'll note your suggestions. Thanks. :)

Hey! Thanks for reading. This is my first ever story. All constructive criticism is welcome. Feel free to mention what you liked and what you didn't.