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Ight im going to hold a horror contest where i will judge the best horror story the horror story can be blood and guts,silent horror,or any other type of horror ...

Noticed i messed up the first line my bad lol

There the man stood, Tapping his long foot against the pavement.He looked to the west with uncertainty , a uneasy frown protruding from his face. Ight please tell me what ...

As i hate editing im going to tell you what u did right btw im liking the story alot and i mean Alot :D so for starters i like how ...

I agree Its a great first chapter When you are going to finalize it you should try to be descriptive as possible it makes the reader feel as if he/she ...

Imo i think You should be realistic and during a fight one of the three die only leaving 2 to fend for themselves

Name: Vual Walsh Nickname/Alias: Vual Age: 24 Gender: Male Element: Ice Ability: Vuals abilty is to control ice,can summon up ice from the element in the earth to do his ...

Yea i agree with everyone elses Ideas and changes And i like the feel of the short story it has that....Darren shan feel (hes a author of cirque du freak ...

Hi am Tim (display name is of the book im writing or atleast trying to) So far im enjoying the system and the people and i know with time ill ...

Sry i didnt put either periods commas or paragraphs i wrote this within 20 mins and needed some ideas of what u think of it i just typed it and ...