GreenTulip

It was just my feelings at the time and he is saying that based off of my personality

I don't think that you understand how upset she is about this review. She didn't want to read after seeing your first few things. It broke her heart and spirit. ...

Hi, I am just going to say something right now. This is beyond hurtful. It wounds a writer's pride. I'm not even going to correct your grammar. You need to ...

Well she hasn't posted it yet, so it won't be up for anyone to read it for a while. And she's like nine during most of this...sooo

Well I was rewriting parts of it anyways

Hello!!! Just informing you that the chapter has been edited and updated. :)

Hello!!! Just informing you that the chapter has been edited and updated. :)

Hello!!! Just informing you that the chapter has been edited and updated. :)

Hello!!! Just informing you that the chapter has been edited and updated. :)

Hello!!! Just informing you that the chapter has been edited and updated. :)

Hello!!! Just informing you that the chapter has been edited and updated. :)

Hello!!! Just informing you that the chapter has been edited and updated. :)

Hello!!! Just informing you that the chapter has been edited and updated. :)

Hello!!! Just informing you that the chapter has been edited and updated. :)

Hello!!! Just informing you that the chapter has been edited and updated. :)