GreatEscape

I just changed the part about the royals only slightly. I didn't want to take that part out completey. I changed it so that it's a little different from the ...

A tragedy indeed. I enjoyed reading this. The rhythm and the flow was good. I was never a fan of this kind of poetry but this was really well written ...

Okay this is one of the first poems I've ever written: Waiting all day, all week to see your face. To look into your brown eyes that hide their true ...

To me this poem sounded like a teenager venting to a friend more than a poem. It could have something to do with the flow or the way it is ...

I think the emotion of the poem conveys nicely. I like how you kept the theme of lighting going throughout the poem. I don't think the flow was quite right ...

Wow. I agree that this has potential. I'd say loads of it. I was intrigued and drawn into it. It leaves the reader thinking about what will happen next, what's ...

Wow! Nice to meet you all! This seems like a really good envirnoment to be in. Thanks for all the advice and information. My name is DaNay but Escape will ...

Hello Everyone! I'm new and just wanted to say hello to everyone! I love writing and hope to write Young Adult novels or Romance novels when I grow up! I'm ...