GreatEscape

Well I think you did a good job of letting us know who the character was. I feel like I good idea of his personality. I never really cared enough ...

This poem is very vague which makes it thoroughly confusing. There are a lot of its, theys, and thems. I think it would help if you took some of those ...

Hello! My name is DaNay but you can call me escape if you like. Anyway I thought this poem was very cute. The rhyme was simple and fun but sometimes ...

I felt like this was a very long read. The description in this piece is very good but I feel like the description is all there is. There was nothing ...

It was almost impossible to sit still. Every time I sat down it only took a few seconds for my legs to start shaking. A few more seconds for me ...

Okay, I really like the plot of the story. I think if it were a movie it would be really creepy, especially the little song the doll sang. There were ...

There is very good poetic description here but it gets to be a little too much at times. I think that it takes away from the emotion of the poem. ...

I agree that this really didn't feel like a poem. It seemed to me more like a prologue to a story. I get the part that he killed the girl ...

Rosabelle stomped up to her bedroom and slammed the door behind her. She loved Knox. She loved him more than anyone or anything on this earth but he was so ...

Great installment. This really isn't a review. I didn't spot anything that I found odd or wrong. I just wanted to let you know this piece was good. It was ...

I like the emotion of the writing and it was intriguing enough to keep me reading. However, I was a little confused by the door part of the story. Is ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I found it relatable and I think it does a good job of describing how a person in this situation feels. I also thought the ...

I really liked this story. I found it sweet and the banter between the brother's realistic. I was confused by the note passing too though. Not because of the name ...

This is my first poem that doesn't rhyme. I'm trying to step outside my usual box, but still give it to me straight. I want to be someone else, because ...

I really like this piece. It held my attention and makes me want to know what's going to happen. I like the flow of it, easy yet intriguing. My only ...