GreatEscape

We were having a party to celebrate the fiftieth anniversary of the alliance between vampires and humans. An alliance, unbeknownst to the humans, formed on a misunderstanding and against our ...

Okay I read yesterday but I couldn't get around to my review. Well here I am now and here's my review: I felt the call from his friend about the ...

Wow. This is a very interesting piece. Usually saying the character's name over and over would start to get repetitive and annoying but for some reason it really works here. ...

Wow I really liked this piece. The emotion was so strong and seemed very real. I also think you had good imagery here. As soon as I started reading I ...

Thank you both for your reviews! Karsten: I did not mean for her to come off as conceited. Her saying that no human could compare to her was meant just ...

I sat on my throne just staring at her. She was absolutely stunning for a human. She was young with the All American blonde hair and blues eyes. She heart ...

This really isn't a review but I just wanted to say this is piece was very good. Better than the first, I'd say. My only grievance is about the relationship ...

I really liked this piece. I was slightly confused as to what kind of relationship the boy and girl had with each other but I was confused in a good ...

Don't worry we all have our own style! I never proofread anything.

Hello! I'm DaNay and welcome to YWS! I don't mean that there was any flaws in his face, just that it would be impossible to make it better than his ...

We ran in all different directions. I wondered who the man was. He looked angry as he chased us. Very very angry actually. We went past several different shops and ...

Okay this is a short poem but I thought I'd share it with you all... This monster must surely be starved. From me, it continues to carve. I fall weaker, ...

Summer is definitely for playing!

I am intrigued to know what's going on. I think you should write more but I think the transitions from day to day could have been smoother. This piece felt ...

Okay, there were a lot of grammar mistakes but I won't go through them because I think Mars got them all. I think this piece has a lot of potential. ...